Hi, and welcome to OpenStreetMap! Since you requested a review, I looked over your changes here. Looks great overall - The only suggestion I'd give is to check the context as far as building outlines. In this case, looking at the roof, it looks like this is all one building structure, containing multiple businesses. Therefore I'd recommend keeping businesses as single nodes placed within the building. (As opposed to overlapping, conflicting building ways - not recommended.)
Everything else, tagging etc. looks great to me. Let me know if you have any questions, and thanks for your contributions!