Hello there :)

you asked for someone to review your change set. I'll give you some feedback:

Looks pretty good already. I took the liberty of making some minor corrections you can review here
https://www.openstreetmap.org/node/4921713441
What I did: removed the phone number and the "shop=florist" since you already set "disused:shop=yes". 

Happy mapping and in case of questions please reach out

silversurfer83