Hey there! I'm a local mapper from Scotts Valley, California. I see that you requested a review of this changeset, so I'm giving it a review.

You have added a lot of great and mostly correctly formatted information about this business. However, the "image" tag appears to be an email address, so the "email" tag should be used here instead.

Also, since this business appears to be located within a large building, I would recommend also adding information in the "Unit" field and potentially even add the "addr:floor" tag to indicate which floor the business is located on.
https://wiki.openstreetmap.org/wiki/Key:addr:floor

Thanks for your contributions to OpenStreetMap!