Hi, and welcome to OpenStreetMap! Since you requested a review, I looked over your addition here. Looks great to me! For your business to show up, it needs to be added as a feature. If you haven't already, I recommend going through the tutorial for editing online. Or if you prefer, you can provide the details of your business here or in a note and I can just add it for you.
Let me know if you have any questions, and thanks for your contributions!