Hi, and thanks for your contribution! Since you requested a review, I looked over your changes here. Everything looks great generally, except for one issue with the opening hours tag. This should use a 24h format, e.g. instead of 2pm you should put 14:00. So, the full opening_hours value should be

Su 09:00-14:00,17:00-21:00; Mo-Th 17:00-21:00; Fr 17:00-21:30; Sa 09:00-14:00,17:00-21:30

Writing hours tags can be really tricky and frustrating, so I sometimes use this tool to make sure I've got it right:
https://openingh.openstreetmap.de/evaluation_tool/

Anyway, thanks again and let me know if you have any questions!