Hello and welcome to OSM :)

Thank you for taking care of your business here at the open geographic database for everybody.

You asked for someone to review your edit. Since you hit save it went live and the review is done by whoever sees the flag. So that's me.

OSM does not allow advertising copy in the database so the description needs to be short and factual like "Sprinkler installation, service and repair for residential and commercial properties".

The phone number should be in international format like "+1 888 860 2199"

Apart from that it's really fine.

Best wishes for your business
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