Hello, thank you for getting in touch! 
You have made two major mistakes. You set the node on the street (houses are (generally) on the left or right of the street). Please put the account in the right building. 

Then you should know that we write keys in lower case. the address is not written in one key, but with the prefix addr: in different keys (see https://wiki.openstreetmap.org/wiki/Addresses#United_States). "Business Email" is noted with the key email and your entry "Hours" is executable under the key opening_hours with the value Mon-Fri 08:00-17:00 (24 hours notation).

If you have corrected the entry, I will be happy to check it and do the finishing touches.