Hi, and welcome to OpenStreetMap! Since you requested a review, I looked over your change here. Things are looking great overall! Here's a suggestion, though. Sometimes, the "main" feature for a business is the outer boundary of the business. That's the case here. When it's like that, it's generally best to keep the building outlines fairly generically tagged, then add all the business details to the larger, main feature. That way things aren't duplicated. I went ahead and fixed that in this case.
Let me know if you have any questions, and thanks for your contribution!