Hi, thanks for your contribution! Since you requested a review, here are a few tips:

- It's best to avoid abbreviations in OSM wherever possible. ("N" -> "North")
- The Description tag should be a concise description of the feature rather than a free-form ad space.
- Opening hours tag follows a specific syntax. It can be a little tricky but using this format makes it machine-readable, meaning apps and whatnot can parse it reliably.

I went ahead and made those changes. Thanks again, and welcome to OSM!