Hi, and welcome to OSM! A couple of tips:
- It's best to keep your changesets confined to related changes. In this case, I'd say one changeset for Logan and one for Provo.
- Overall your tags look good, but there was one church that got tagged location=Purple Driveway church. I'm guessing you meant to put loc_name the same way you did other nearby churches. I fixed that for you.

Thanks for your contributions and welcome!