Hello Bill, and thank you for updating your office element.

I appreciate your effort to revise the description. However, the text still reads more like a professional or promotional bio than map-relevant information. OpenStreetMap focuses on factual, geographic data, for example, what is located where, rather than personal qualifications or case descriptions.

For this object, a concise and neutral description such as: "Law office of Bill Bone" would be sufficient and fully appropriate.

Also, please note that there already appears to be another OSM entry for the same business at the same address. You may want to check whether these represent the same entity and, if so, consider merging or keeping only one to avoid duplicates.

https://www.openstreetmap.org/node/13086506549

Best regards, Pascal