Great edits! You might want to save more often, to keep the changeset smaller, otherwise you're doing great for a new mapper . 

Do you bike, too? I do! :) But, I noticed that when you added the City Cycling Shop, you tagged it as shop=tyres, instead of shop=bicycle. If you're trying to denote a bike shop that fixes bikes (or tyres) you can also add the tag "service:bicycle:repair=yes"

Here's how that may look like: https://www.openstreetmap.org/node/11538579163

Kung may tanong ka, or interesadong malaman kung paano i-edit ang iba pang mga bagay sa OSM, maari mo akong kontakin, o pasyalan mo yung mga community-maintained channels dito sa Pilipinas:

https://osm.org/wiki/PH